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The Lesser Rite of the Octogram

An Abjuration of Octarine Persuasion

1. Face the western portal in the posture of repose.
2. Regulate the breath: 3 – 3 – 3
3. Form a sphere of dark matter in the center of the chest.
4. Kiss the weapon, saying ‘Choyofaque’
5. Point the weapon at the eidolon, giving formula:
‘We believe in Nothing…’
6. Describe the Octogram of Water, vibrating ‘Thaldoma’.
7. Stab weapon into center of the star.
8. Turn to the northern portal, tracing circumference.
9. Describe the Octogram of Earth, vibrating ‘Nobo’.
10. Stab weapon into center of the star.
11. Turn to the northern portal, tracing circumference.
12. Describe the Octogram of Air, vibrating ‘Dijo’.
13. Stab weapon into center of the star.
14. Turn to the northern portal, tracing circumference.
15. Describe the Octogram of Fire, vibrating ‘Ashara’.
16. Stab weapon into center of the star.
17. Turn to the northern portal, tracing circumference.
18. Resume posture of repose.
19. Make the sign of the Trident, charging the wards.
20. Give formula:
We stand surrounded by the four.
All creation comes from their unity;
existence through their individuality.
Mother Chaos circumscribes the whole.
And everywhere, We, the center.
21. Resume posture of repose.